The Pursuer and His Princess

Systems and Sex - if that's what you're looking for, you found it :DOn a serious note, the writing is clear and easy to follow, with a nice flow. System elements are a little heavy for my personal tastes, but appropriate for a litrpg. It feels like the MC is always down for some void sex (several sexualized encounters as of chapter 20) so I would consider that to be a primary facet/draw for readers. It takes a while for other characters to be introduced, but the story starts to open up more around ch18. The world is well-fleshed out and action scenes are easy to envision.

i guess i should review my story to push it out a bit. im just going to say some random stuff like i am now to get 140 words in and make it a valid review. anyway if you're reading this, the story is about the main character disobeying the world he lives in and going berserk many times over, leading him to gain the king's attention and become wanted. later on it becomes more apocalyptic, well how i've planned it so far anyway. you'll just have to read to find out. Woah, this is way more than 140 words, i'll post it now

Expect for the clique bit on the rivalry of families, everything is great👍

Meanwhile, the four girls stop 50 yards away from where they can't see the boys and vice-versa. They take turns to do their business as the other two stands guard. Aisha had already communicated with them about her intuition and how strong it has become which can only mean that danger is close by. Although the other two girls didn't believe in superstition and what Aisha said, they stayed alert.

But the meteor men beg to differ

Mighty Man dug his knee into Jason's chin, the explosion of movement catching him off guard. The businessman was sent flying up in the air, his body groveling as the air rushed out of his body.

"No, we are not naming the creature. Do you know what happens when you name monsters?" She yelled back at me.

"udah gak papa mama aja"